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Sincerly,Your Vampire... by ~Abyss21:iconAbyss21:



Sincerly, Your Vampire Lover

You dont look so afraid
You're not moving away from me
How could you risk your life?
When I'm not human, cant you see?
My life is forever cursed and gone
Yet it's blessed with you at my side
As the sun begins to rise
As I must find a place to hide

My thirst for your blood
Why it is much too strong
For the love we share til your death
Which makes it all too wrong
As you hold me and kiss my lips
My tears begin to shed and turn to dust
A feeling of sadness and love
To be immortal,like a machine i will rust

I am not human yet you love me so
I must not taint you, it'll only destroy your life
As I wait for your death, I hold the stake to my heart
Like you are holding this knife
Do what you must do to stay alive
Unlike you, I live forever and I do not age
The world that is full of humans
Can leave many people with rage

For I hide in the darkness
Waiting until the sun goes down
When your death arrives
I'll jump into the sea,Though i wish I'll drown
I am your vampire, Your cold-blooded love
If I'd ever taint you, it'll only bring you pain
If you were to die here in front of me
I will never let your death be in vain

As the sun begins to descend
As I walk into the night
When the moon comes up
Then I begin my flight
Our romance is deadly and strange
The humans cannot understand
As the sun comes up, I go back to the dark
Please take my hand
As forever isnt what we can call our love
Because unlike you
I am a vampire

-The Eternal Loner
         L(7/6/08)
©2008-2009 ~Abyss21
:iconabyss21:

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:icontjdavis:
interesting and very nice. only a few spelling errors but still enjoyable.

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All the world loves a lover.
Ignorance is bliss.
Whats up people!!??
:iconabyss21:
yea i know.....i tend to do that alot...its quite a habit....but i will edit it though.......

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And the rain will kill us all
We throw ourshelves against the wall
But noone else can see
The Preservation of the martyr in me
:icontjdavis:
keep up the good work and if you will comment on my new peice "The liar"

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All the world loves a lover.
Ignorance is bliss.
Whats up people!!??
:icondrea14:
I really enjoyed reading this! The rhyme scheme was excellent as well~ Good job!

--
Don't look now, but...
I'm riffin' on your guitar, stealin' your Star Power.

CRACK IS WHACK, BETCH! :ohnoes:
:iconabyss21:
thank you.....

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And the rain will kill us all
We throw ourshelves against the wall
But noone else can see
The Preservation of the martyr in me
:iconmystical-whitewolf:
Wow I loved it...reminds me of a charator I made for my vampire game I sometimes play. Always the lover but hard to love fully cause he will live forever when others will not...Yes I do play a male charator, but besides that...I do so love the useage of words and feelings...makes me know just what it is like to love and know that it will not last. Then again I know that feeling all to well...and I am not a vampire, so it can define some humans as well.

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Life is too short to not live in the fastlane.

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